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Good articlePolly (The Kinks song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
September 30, 2022Good article nomineeListed

Assessment

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Rated Start Class, Low Importance for WikiProject Songs and Kinks on 15:46, 11 March 2010 (UTC). Article is short, but well sourced and conveys all essential information. - I.M.S. (talk) 15:46, 11 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Polly (The Kinks song)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:25, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This is going to be reviewed by me today! --K. Peake 06:25, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Write the genre out in the body to avoid using a citation in the infobox
  • Done.
  • It wasn't actually on the album, it was a non-album single.
  • "It was released on" → "The song was released on"
  • Seems a bit repetitive, no? The sentences before and after also use "song" or "the song".
  • Move the release sentence to being after the writing/recording and inspiration sentences
  • Change the part after the recording to merely "during the sessions for the album."
  • See above.
  • Remove introduction to Dylan Thomas because that is sufficient solely in the body
  • Done.
  • "though Davies's resulting character" → "though his resulting character"
  • Done.
  • Remove the English composer introduction to David Whitaker since that is sufficient in the body only
  • Done.

Background and inspiration

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  • Maybe you could write the genre out here and try titling in Background and composition?
  • Done.
  • "beyond have having the same name." → "beyond having the same name."
  • Fixed.
  • Quote box and second para look good, apart from the lack of a genre mention in the latter
  • Done.

Recording and release

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  • "as the song's producer." → "as the song's sole producer."
  • Seems like an unnecessary word to me.
  • I don't think it would be correct to use a semi-colon because "either Alan MacKenzie or Brian Humphires" is not an independent clause (MOS:SEMICOLON).
  • Remove wikilink on Rasa Davies since she does not have her own article or even a section
  • Done.
  • "to possibly features a" → "to possibly feature a"
  • Done.
  • "Davies selected "Polly" to" → "Ray Davies selected "Polly" to" per MOS:SAMESURNAME
  • I forgot to fix all these instances when I added Rasa's name in. By MOS:SAMESURNAME, I've changed the rest to "Ray" rather than "Davies".
  • "was "more rhythmic," → "is "more rhythmic,"
  • Done.
  • Any more reviews you could add here?
  • I unfortunately haven't been able to find any. Given that the A-side "Wonderboy" was such a failure, there was little attention afforded for this B-side.
  • "roughly a tenth of" → "roughly a 10th of" per MOS:NUM
  • I only see MOS:FRAC mentioning to avoid using ordinals like -th when spelling out fractions. Anyway, by MOS:FRAC, I've changed "a tenth" to "one-tenth".
  • "among the fifteen tracks" → "among the 15 tracks" per above
  • "The song has since" → "It has since"
  • Done.
  • Done.

Personnel

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  • Remove wikilink on Rasa Davies
  • Done.

Notes

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  • Good

References

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Citations

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  • Good

Sources

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  • Done.
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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  • Tkbrett You should swap the release sentence with the writing/production since the creation comes before the actual release, also still introduction the record as their sixth studio album even though this is not part of it. --K. Peake 08:20, 27 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]