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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this today, though it won't be done until at least tomorrow. --K. Peake 09:37, 13 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after second studio album
  • "and the song's producer" → "and the sole producer"
  • Add a sentence between the writing/production and genres one about how the song was created
  • "is the opposite. In the lyrics," → "is the opposite; in the lyrics,"
  • Remove the usage of very per this not being sourced in the body
  • "reached number 48, 79 and" → "reached numbers 48, 79 and"
  • "was awarded a gold certification from" → "was awarded a gold certification in Canada from"
  • "remix album Club Future Nostalgia." → "remix album, Club Future Nostalgia (2020)."
  • Mention that the festival was in 2022 and use "that same year" later on in the sentence

Background and production[edit]

  • Img looks good!
  • Pipe mixed to Audio mixing (recorded music)
  • Pipe mastered to Mastering (audio)
  • "a bunch of music" I don't think this is appropriate language for Wiki
  • Wikilink bassline
  • "before the chorus. Kirkpatrick used" → "before the chorus and Kirkpatrick used" with the pipe
  • Wikilink tempo
  • Pipe percussion to Percussion instrument
  • "lag a bit" is this really appropriate language?
  • "He used LFO tool" → "Kirkpatrick used LFO tool"
  • "Kirkpatrick used the LFO tool to make" → "The tool also had the purpose of making"
  • "He also used a" → "Kirkpatrick further used a"
  • Pipe snare to Snare drum
  • Img looks good!
  • "decided to leave it in" → "decided to leave the instrument in"
  • "he wanted to make it" → "the producer wanted to make it"
  • "in the hook. Kirkpatrick used an" → "in the hook and used an"
  • "he included a part from" → "the producer included a section from"
  • Wikilink melodyne per MOS:LINK2SECT

Music and lyrics[edit]

  • Remove wikilink on midtempo
  • Remove wikilink on tempo
  • [12][13][14][15][9] is too many refs grouped together, so move some around to the appropriate areas of the sentence
  • [19] should only be invoked once in the sentence
  • Wikilink synthesizer
  • "for stress-reliving" → "for stress-relieving" on the audio sample text
  • "the live bass. This chorus also introduces a beeping sounds." → "the live bass while beeping sounds are introduced."
  • Wikilink tambourine
  • I don't think spine-tingling is very neutral here
  • "when she sings" → "when Lipa sings"
  • "but realizing that unlike them." what does this mean? Please clarify...
  • "sums up the song's" → "sum up the song's"

Release and promotion[edit]

Reception[edit]

  • "on Future Nostalgia saying" → "on Future Nostalgia, saying"
  • "called it a "slinky" monster and stated it's" → "called the song a "slinky" monster and stated it is"
  • "complimented "airtight" and" → "complimented the "airtight" and"
  • "Writing for, Pitchfork Anna Gaca noted" → "For Pitchfork, Anna Gaca noted"
  • Pipe ballad to Sentimental ballad
  • "a "flurry of" → "a "flurr[y] of" per alteration of the source
  • "called it a" → "labeled the song a"
  • "The Midland refix was nominated" → "The Midland remix was nominated"
  • "79 in Slovakia and 101" → "number 79 in Slovakia and number 101"

Track listings[edit]

  • Add the appropriate sources for these

Personnel[edit]

  • Good

Charts[edit]

  • Good

Certifications[edit]

  • Good

References[edit]

  • Copyvio score looks incredible at 9.1%!!!!
  • Remove or replace ref 17 per WP:RSP
  • Cite Dancing Astronaut as publisher instead on ref 32
  • On ref 49, is the first citation really reliable when it is aligned as far-right? Also, cite Universo Online and Trome as publishers instead.

External links[edit]

  • Good

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 19:59, 14 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  •  Fail after no response; this is disappointing from an experienced user like LOVI33. --K. Peake 07:42, 2 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]