Talk:Push the Button (Sugababes song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 13:13, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Info box[edit]

  • Order the genres into alphabetical?

Lead[edit]

  • and an artist whom collaborated with Austin. → and a singer with whom Austin had previously collaborated with.
    • Hmm an editor suggested to avoid ending the sentence with "with".
  • Link music critics
  • , in London. → Remove "in"

Recording and inspiration[edit]

  • together → collectively

Composition[edit]

  • Do critics actually cite it as pop and electronic?

Release[edit]

  • No issues

Response[edit]

  • I made a slight c/e to the section as a whole.
  • Heywood described → First name and publication?
  • Hoffman → Same again.
  • Lots of quotes, can you paraphrase some?

Chart performance[edit]

  • after Freak Like Me, Round Round and Hole in the Head. → These need quotes around them.

Music video[edit]

  • Buena explained video's → the video's?

Live performances[edit]

  • No issues.

Track listings[edit]

  • No issues.

Credits and personnel[edit]

  • No issues.

Charts and certifications[edit]

  • Would be good if you could mark up the tables according to WP:ACCESS. If you don't know what this is I can do it for you.
    • Okay thanks. what is mark up anyways? Till
      • See S&M (song) as an example. It's the darker shaded bit. Aaron • You Da One 14:00, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
        • Done. Aaron • You Da One 14:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
          • Okay thanks. But the convenience arrows are missing. Is it supposed to be like that? Till
            • You can add it if you want, isn't essential though. It's already in alphabetical order. Aaron • You Da One

References[edit]

  • FN10: Link work and publisher
  • FN13: Link first iTunes and first Apple

Summary[edit]

A well written article :). Not that many points to address. On hold 7 days.

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