Talk:Quién (Ricardo Arjona song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 01:37, 23 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]

" The song was written by Arjona, and its music was composed by Puerto Rican singer-songwriter Tommy Torres" - what's the difference between written and composed? And produced?
Written is about the lyrics, composed is about the melody, and produced is about the actual making of the sounds.
Can you clarify that? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"who also worked with Arjona on Adentro" - I think you should clarify Adentro is an album.
Done.
"and was recorded between five studios in the city of Miami." - shouldn't this also mention the Mexico City session?
Oh yes. Done.
"Categorized by Arjona as "the world out of the window and the prison built by ourselves"" - I don't think "categorized" is the appropriate term here. Maybe "described"?
Done.
"In a press conference, Arjona stated that "yesterday is the cumulus of this that put us here, which raised us and made us what we are, for good or bad." - what is this in reference to? When was that?
Explained.
""Se Nos Muere El Amor"" - since this is a quote within a quote, it should be like this - 'Se Nos Muere El Amor'
Done.
" is now with piano and flauta" - perhaps say [flute] instead of flauta, since it's the English language Wiki?
Omg yes.
The background section goes into a lot of detail on stuff about the album, but not the song. Try cutting out the info that isn't related to the song.
The album and song production came together, and specific info about the song, separate from the album is not available :(
"After spending the majority of his career signed to Sony, and later, Sony BMG, Arjona signed a long-term recording deal with Warner Music Latina in September 2008.[3] Iñigo Zabala, chairman of Warner Music Latin America commented that "He's an artist that fits perfectly with our company."[3] This departure made Quien Dijo Ayer the last album the artist directly released on his former label, although Sony later released another album named Simplemente Lo Mejor.[4]" - I think this is a bit superfluous to the song itself, since that's more album info. Given that this song was one of a few that was made for the album, it's not that pertinent to include it here. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The song was produced by Lee Levin, Dan Warner and Torres with additional help from Arjona." - is there any more role on what they did? What did they produce, exactly?
I guess I answered this above: They produced the actual sounds; nothing else is stated.
Nowhere does it mention all of the instruments on the song, and who plays what, aside from the vocals.
It is done on the personnel section.
I meant in prose. Better now. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:57, 24 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Could you get a source for the Youtube hits aside from the link itself? It's not working for me.
Nope. Not in any other source...

All in all, the article is pretty short and could use more info. It's on hold for now. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 01:37, 23 December 2012 (UTC)[reply]