Talk:Raúl Alfonsín/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi old friend! Will review this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 15:05, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:45, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

@Cambalachero: Added all my comments below: Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Merge the first two paras, they look too short.
• I think we should link "writ" and "Self-amnesty". In the main text as well.
• Carlos Menem is linked twice
• full stop law and the law of Due Obedience No italics needed

Early life and career

• Alfonsín was born I would like to have the main text begin with his full name
• Can Buenos Aires be linked?
• Following his elementary schooling Not clear if "his" refers to the father or the son
• Alfonsín bought a local newspaper (El Imparcial) I am sure you refer to the company and not that he picked up one from a stall. Can be clearly worded
• La Plata is linked twice.

Presidential campaign

• the slogan "Ahora Alfonsín" In which language is this? And what does it mean?
• the Plaza de la República No italics needed
• in clean elections Meaning?

First days

• Duplink: Peronism

Aftermath of the Dirty War

• You say "Dirty War" at places, and "dirty war" elsewhere. We need consistency throughout the article
• Full stop law and Law of Due Obedience don't need italics
• Duplinks: Mothers of the Plaza de Mayo, Jorge Videla, Emilio Massera, Leopoldo Galtieri, Enrique Gorriarán Merlo

Social policies

• Duplink: University of Buenos Aires

Foreign policy

• Duplink: Pope John Paul II

Economic policy

• Duplink: Bernardo Grinspun
• There is a clarification needed template
• Link gross domestic product

Midterm elections

• No source for the first para?

Later years

• There are some clarification and citation needed templates.
• Source for the 5th para?
• support anyway "anyway" looks informal.
• Duplinks: Buenos Aires, Casa Rosada

Death

• started a Candlelight vigil. No caps for "C"
• Duplinks: María Lorenza, Barreneche Carlos Menem, Eduardo Duhalde, Néstor Kirchner

Legacy

• Duplinks: Pact of Olivos, Ricardo Alfonsín
• son, Ricardo Alfonsín Comma not needed
• This latter award "The" not "this"

That should be all. These done, I would be happy to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 10:46, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Done, but I kept "Plaza de la República" in italics, per MOS:FOREIGNITALIC. Cambalachero (talk) 18:50, 1 April 2016 (UTC)

Thank you. I believe this article can be promoted now. Great job! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 19:01, 1 April 2016 (UTC)