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Removed out-of-place comment about freemasonry[edit]

I have removed this (previously the last sentence in the entire article):

His close collaborator, the colonel Angelo Gatti, belonged to the Italian Freemasonry.^[1]

This is impeccably sourced, but what is the relevance? Even in the source itself this is just a passing mention in a footnote (which is also the only mention of Gatti). It almost feels like an attempt to imply something sinister. -Elmer Clark (talk) 17:22, 22 May 2023 (UTC) Elmer Clark (talk) 17:22, 22 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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^ De Leonardis, Massimo (2017). "Il duca, il generale e Caporetto.Appunti sui rapporti fra Tommaso Gallarati Scotti e Luigi Cadorna" (PDF). Eunomia. Rivista semestrale di Storia e Politica Internazionali (in Italian). VI (2). University of Salento: 197, 03. doi:10.1285/i22808949a6n2p187. ISSN 2280-8949. OCLC 1105033903. Archived from the original on 5 September 2020.

[1] De Leonardis, Massimo (2017). "Il duca, il generale e Caporetto.Appunti sui rapporti fra Tommaso Gallarati Scotti e Luigi Cadorna" (PDF). Eunomia. Rivista semestrale di Storia e Politica Internazionali (in Italian). VI (2). University of Salento: 197, 03. doi:10.1285/i22808949a6n2p187. ISSN 2280-8949. OCLC 1105033903. Archived from the original on 5 September 2020.

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