Talk:Ranulf Flambard

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May 5, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed

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Untitled[edit]

Is this article really to be considered Start Class? It's not exactly a stub. I think it's well referenced and written. Hopefully someone will have a look and reclassify it. I have no vested interest here either. Literally just found it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.75.99.154 (talk) 22:05, 19 March 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator on the road[edit]

I'm on the road and may or may not be able to access the internet reliably. Figured I should let folks know in case the article gets reviewed. Ealdgyth - Talk 14:51, 5 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA assessment[edit]

I've gone through the article and fixed a few minor things, but it certainly meets the GA criteria, so I'm not gonna bother with a more detailed review. I'll leave a few suggestions for improvement though, mostly matters of personal taste and preference

"The story [about Ranulf's niece and the legate] is unlikely to be true." - says who, and why?
"...he would have been about 5-foot-9-inch (1.8 m) tall." It should perhaps be pointed out that this would have been a relatively imposing size at the time, but such a statement would of course have to be sourced.
Personally I prefer to put commas after the author name in refs (Barlow, William Rufus p. 141), but this is a minor thing of course.

Good job, I especially enjoyed the intelligent use of the best of up-to-date scholarship, which is something I find is often missing. Lampman ^{Talk to me!} 19:34, 5 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]