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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will review this. MWright96 (talk) 07:36, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Plot[edit]

  • "they use comm badges" - communication badges
  • "With command function enabled," - With the command function enabled,
  • "After the events, transporter is used to return Picard," - After the events, the transporter is used to return Picard,

Writing[edit]

  • The wikilink for DNA should be on the first instance it is mentioned not the second

Direction and casting[edit]

  • Remove the duplicate link for Rick Berman

Broadcast[edit]

  • "This was part of an overall decline in ratings during the first part of the sixth season, the preceeding episode," - replace the first comma with a semi-colon
  • "received a rating of 13.4 percent" - sentence lacks a full stop

Critical reception[edit]

  • "Handlen said that the Miles/Keiko scene was "dramatically interesting", and said that the part of the episode with the Ferengi was "a nice mini-action movie that helps pick up a generally dodgy hour"." - reptition of the word "said"
  • "He said that it resembled the Star Trek: The Animated Series episode "The Counter-Clock Incident", and said that the first act of "Rascals" was compelling." - same issue as above

References[edit]

On hold for now. MWright96 (talk) 12:26, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for the review, I've addressed those points as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 14:19, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Lovely. Can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 14:24, 18 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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