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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:54, 26 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • and songwriter Madonna. The album chronicles the singer's → Two clipped sentences that can be easily connected to "and songwriter Madonna, chronicling the singer's"
  • September 15, 2017, by → you don't need the second comma
  • and Eagle Records → ,and by Eagle Records
  • Rebel Heart Tour is Madonna's fifth live album and contains bonus content like → Rebel Heart Tour also contains bonus content including
  • In which year did Tears of a Clown occur?
  • 22 song → 22-song
  • Link "critics" to Music journalism
  • who noted Madonna's live singing → who picked Madonna's live vocals
  • in most of the nations → in most of the countries it charted in
  • and top-ten of the album charts → as well as the top ten of the album charts
  • won the category → won in the category

Infobox

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  • All seems to be on point here ;)

Background

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  • earning US$169.8 million, and was attended → earning US$169.8 million; it was attended (better wording here)
  • Entertainment Weekly announced → Entertainment Weekly subsequently announced (better flow)
  • it featured behind the scenes footage → it featured behind-the-scenes footage
  • of the tour.[5] Billboard showcased an exclusive behind-the-scenes look for the tour on December 2. → of the tour,[5] which had been exclusively previewed by Billboard on December 2, 2016.
  • as DVD, Blu-ray, and download → on DVD, Blu-ray and digital formats.
  • digital formats.[9] It is Madonna's fifth live album and contains bonus content like the Tears of a Clown show at Melbourne's Forum Theatre, as well as a 22 song double CD → digital formats,[9] containing bonus content including the Tears of a Clown show at Melbourne's Forum Theatre in YEAR, as well as a 22-song double CD. (the fact that it is her 5th live album is irrelevant in the article's body)
  • listed the total running time → listed the total running time of the album
  • 2 hours → two hours
  • The release was distributed → The release of Rebel Heart Tour was distributed
  • for pre-order from August 16, 2017 → for pre-order on August 16, 2017

Critical response

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  • You need an overall sentence, such as "Upon its release, Rebel Heart Tour was met with generally positive reviews from music critics".
  • and felt that the release was a → describing the release as a
  • as well as fans who may have missed it, → this is completely irrelevant and should be removed
  • 4 stars out of 5 → please write out the numbers
  • saying that although Madonna's film career might not have been successful, "she knows → remove irelevant content about her unsuccessful film career and change into: saying that "[Madonna] knows
  • He further complimented the production, the video quality and combined with the audio, recommended it for being → He further complimented the production, the video and the audio quality of the album, recommending it for being
  • from Inquisitr gave positive review → from Inquisitr gave a positive review
  • gave positive review for the live album of the release but criticized the DVD and Blu-ray versions of the release for poor editing. He declared Rebel Heart Tour as Madonna's best live album to date and found it better than the DVD and Blu-ray. → gave a positive review for Rebel Heart Tour, calling it Madonna's best live album to date, but criticized the poor editing of its DVD and Blu-ray versions.
  • He complimented Madonna's live singing on the album and not using digital enhancement on her vocals → He also complimented Madonna's live, unprocessed vocals on the album.
  • during the dance-oriented performances → during dance sequences
  • from Attitude gave a positive review, describing the release → from Attitude commended the release, describing it
  • complimenting the dancers and Madonna's footwork onstage → complimenting the dancers, Madonna's footwork onstage

Commercial reception

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  • I would rather rename the section into "Commercial performance", but it's your choice
  • You need an overall sentence here as well, such as "The album attained commercial success following its premiere."
  • It also reached number → The album also reached number (alternating words for better flow)
  • Year of release for Precious Memories: Live at the Ryman in brackets
  • number-one → number one
  • In France, the live album reached → use "peaked at" here for alternation
  • Link "SNEP Albums Chart" to "French Albums Chart"
  • copies while the video versions topped the French DVD → comma before "while"
  • certified the video Platinum → eventually certified... (for flow)
  • Across Europe the album → Across the rest of Europe, the album
  • top-ten of the charts → top ten of the charts
  • won the category → won in the category
  • Rename the section into "Commercial performance and accolades" because of the award

Track listing

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  • Flawless ;)

Personnel

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  • Credits adapted from Rebel Heart Tour liner notes → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Rebel Heart Tour
  • Unlink "Madonna"

Charts

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  • Flawless ;)

Certifications

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  • Flawless ;)

Release history

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  • Flawless ;)

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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  • 38.7% is still acceptable!

References

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  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
  • No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

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@IndianBio: Hi there! This article requires a bit of work, but it could easily be brought to GA status. I have put it  On hold for 7 days to allow you work on the article in concordance with my comments above. Best regards and good luck; Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:00, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: I have addressed all comments, except the summary line that you had asked for in the beginning of the critical/commercial sections. Reason being since I could not find a source calling the album as "successful" or "received positive reviews", it did not feel correct to have a POV pushing statement. —IB [ Poke ] 11:19, 3 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Gladly passing this! Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 21:24, 3 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
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