Talk:Red Museum/GA1
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 23:27, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
Will review soon. Ruby 2010/2013 23:27, 8 January 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments[edit]
- Add wikilinks for characters in plot
- Not a fan of the image box; the images don't look good side by side, and the formatting doesn't quite fit the box template
- Identify that Carter is series creator in production section
- You repeat CBS is the network for Fences twice in the production section; you can just mention CBS the second time (and get rid of the second wikilink)
- Executive Producer -> Executive producer
- Identify Wong as a producer (or whatever his title is)
- mixed-to-negative -> mixed to negative
- Creative if convoluted -> creative if convoluted
- "Red Museum' tries..." Is the ' a typo on your part, or the authors?
- This link doesn't go where you'd like it to (find a different url?)
- Italicize and add wikilink to Entertainment Weekly, and add date (ref 4)
- Use consistent date formatting (9 December 2011 vs December 9, 2011 for example)
- Unitalicize Critical Myth (it's a website, not a print source)
On hold for seven days while above comments get addressed. Please respond here when you have finished. Thanks, Ruby 2010/2013 01:49, 9 January 2012 (UTC)