Talk:Richard C. Bush
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This page should not be speedy deleted because...[edit]
This page should not be speedily deleted because Richard C. Bush is worthy of an entry in Wikipedia. What we need is further elaboration and constructive suggestions for better edition, which will fulfill the spirit of Wikipedia better. Thank you an advance for any constructive suggestion about edition. :)
Spaced Out, Needs Fleshing Out[edit]
I added section headlines like "education," "professional background" to break up the entry, which was just one block of text. I also added paragraph breaks for easier reading. I took out some detail that make this sound like a LinkedIn profile. We do not need to know exactly what months he changed jobs. I agree with the above editor. This entry is not enough and reads like a self-serving bio. But Bush is prominent enough to have a short Wikipedia entry - and this should not be deleted. PumpkinKitten (talk) 15:49, 12 October 2016 (UTC)