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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:50, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Should dance really be included as a genre in the infobox if dance-pop is already?
  • Wouldn't "in various countries" be more appropriate right after the formats?
  • "it was met with a warm reception" → "the song received a warm reception"
  • "the music of the song and" → "the music of it and"
  • "including in Canada, Norway," → "including Canada, Norway,"
  • Poland should come before the certification body in that sentence
  • Pipe neon light to Neon lighting

Background and composition[edit]

  • "Few days prior its release," → "A few days prior its release,"
  • Mention in the release sentence that it was for digital download and streaming in various countries
  • The duration is not sourced
  • Again, should dance be mentioned as a genre if dance-pop already is?

Reception[edit]

  • Maybe merge this with the below section and retitle to Reception and promotion per that being only one para?
  • "to blend "driving instrumentals [...]" → "to blend a "driving instrumental [...]"
  • "ready to dance."" → "ready to dance"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "kickstart the weekend" → "kickstart your weekend" per the source's wording
  • "foresaw it "to reign supreme in clubs" → "foresaw it as "destined to rule clubs" per above
  • "it peaked at number 13" → "the song peaked at number 13"

Music video[edit]

  • Pipe neon lights to Neon lighting
  • "Ora's appearance, stating that "she's" → "Ora's appearance, stating: "She's"

Track listing[edit]

  • Should acoustic really be capitalised?

Charts[edit]

  • Good

Certifications[edit]

  • Good

Release history[edit]

  • Good

References[edit]

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly as expected! --K. Peake 11:01, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Hey @Kyle Peake: long time no see :D. Everything was addressed and thanks for the review! Iaof2017 (talk) 15:02, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    @Iaof2017  Pass now, however can you edit the talk page since I'm not able to on mobile? K. Peake 17:35, 17 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]