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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:49, 16 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Grabbing for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 10:49, 16 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, let's get this going.

  • Done.
  • Change 3000 to 3,500 - purely because it made me do a double take when you then mention the year 2000 in the same sentence. Same issue with the line under Watershed.
  • Done.
  • Link Quakers, as well as the various things in the sentence beginning "Claystones"
  • Done.
  • Done.
  • Move the link to limestone to the previous paragraph, as you've currently got the second mention linked
  • Done.
  • I'd merge the last two paragraphs of the section, since one is a single seven word sentence. Just delete the line breaks and it'll be fine.
  • Done.
  • Watershed: I'd merge the second and third paragraphs, since like the last section, there's a single sentence paragraph there.
  • Merged the second with the first instead, seemed to belong better there.
  • History: Could "Their lengths are 64.0 feet (19.5 m) and 46.9 feet (14.3 m) and the first was repaired in 2011." be re-written to avoid the two "and"s?
  • Done.
  • Cite #3: You've got the publisher in the author section.
  • It was actually written by an organization, not an individual person, as is the case with a lot of those kinds of documents.
  • Other cites - you see to be missing publisher details on a few. You've got the author and the title, but no publisher.
  • Done.

I think that's everything. Placing on hold for seven days. Miyagawa (talk) 21:29, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]