Talk:Robert of Bath

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Robert of Bath/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Buidhe (talk · contribs) 02:56, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]


GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Prose comments below
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
    I checked some of the references and found no issues with verifiability or plagiarism.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    No images, presumably because none are available
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Just two minor comments below, otherwise it definitely meets the GA criteria. (t · c) buidhe 03:06, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He was the bishop that organized the archdeacons of the diocese on a territorial basis." does that mean he reorganized the archdeacons to operate on a territorial basis? If so, this could be more clear
    • Let's try "He was the bishop that set up the territorial organization of the archdeacons of the diocese." Is that better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Robert also built at Bath" what does this mean?
    • Is "Robert continued the building work on church building at Bath," better? Ealdgyth (talk) 13:12, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

(t · c) buidhe 03:06, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

    • Buidhe just checking in... Ealdgyth (talk) 16:29, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
      • Sorry, I managed to miss your comments. I am satisfied and will pass it now. (t · c) buidhe 23:02, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]