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GA Review

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Reviewer: Amitchell125 (talk · contribs) 08:08, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Happy to review the article.

Review

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Lead section

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  • Link theologian.
  • during the period – ‘from’?
  • There is an image available here which you might wish to add.

1 Life

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  • Link Biblical commentary (Exegesis); Cistercians.
  • Office occurs five times in three sentences, consider reducing the frequency.
  • I would amend "Robertus cognomento Scriba quartus prior" or "Robert surnamed Scribe fourth prior" to ‘{{lang|la|Robertus cognomento Scriba quartus prior}} (‘Robert surnamed Scribe fourth prior’).
  • published yet – I’m unsure that yet works (see MOS:RELTIME).
  • securely - ‘definitely’? (minor point).

5 References

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6 Further reading

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On hold

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I'm putting the article on hold for a week until 13 June to allow time for the issues raised to be addressed, although there are not that many points that need sorting. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 12:54, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

All done but the url for Knowles et al. (I prefer not to use urls in the references), the hyphenator (as the printed copies I have use 10 digit ISBNs, I don't see how it's required to "update" them), and I can't see the pages from the Glossa Ordinalia - Brill does not like me at all (or more correctly, Brill likes my money way too much... heh). Ealdgyth (talk) 18:49, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Passing

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All looks good now, passing the article. Regards, Amitchell125 (talk) 19:50, 5 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]