Talk:Rock Me (One Direction song)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:06, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! :D — Robin (talk) 01:58, 2 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

It was written by Peter Svensson, and Sam Hollander in collaboration with Lukasz 'Dr. Luke' Gottwald, Henry 'Circut' Walter, and Allan 'Kool Kojak' Grigg, the producers. →
It came together in a single-day collaboration: Grigg worked out its beat, Hollander conceptualised its title, and the melody "just came". → The song was created in one day: Grigg conceptualised the beat, Hollander thought the name of the song and the melody "just came".
to that of Queen 1977 single "We Will Rock You". → to that of the Queen single "We Will Rock You" (1997).
- All done — Robin (talk) 19:46, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Background and conception

Co-producers Lukasz 'Dr. Luke' Gottwald and Henry 'Circut' Walter ended up with writing credits on the finished recording too, as the sound of a song has as much to do with its identity.[1] → Why? The last part doesn't make much sense.
- Better? — Robin (talk) 19:46, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Composition and lyrical interpretation

of Queen 1977 single "We Will Rock You". → same as in lead, you need "the"
According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Sony/ATV Music Publishing, → You don't need this bit.
- Actually, I think the article does due to the same exact reason that you wrote below. — Robin (talk) 19:46, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - No, no one includes this. It's pointless prose. — AARON • ^TALK 21:05, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    - Removed — Robin (talk) 21:19, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
F4 to C6 Unless one of them does a high "woo" exclamation, I find this very difficult to believe. Musicnotes are either right or wrong in their vocal range for the song. But oh well, it's sourced, so nothing I can do about it lol.

Chart history

Remove history lol
- Changed to chart performance. 'Chart' sounds so monotone and boring. — Robin (talk) 19:46, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References

Hearst Magazines needs linking in FN6
Guardian Media and News needs linking in FN9. And it's actually News and Media, not Media and News
FN11 has no link. Billboard now has linked to the Bubbling Under on billboard.com
- All done. — Robin (talk) 19:46, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Status

On hold — AARON • ^TALK 14:39, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA — AARON • ^TALK 21:55, 4 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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