Talk:Rosemary Edna Sinclair/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:05, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

General

• Some close paraphrasing is possible [1]
  • I have addressed the issue. Some of the sentences are in quotes and others pertain to titles or names
• No dablinks or external link issue.

Early life and education

• 12 year old Hyphens
• Done

Personal life

• Valentine's Day 1970 Let's give the plain date.

• Added "14 February"

• Thanks for the review. Addressed above issues in the article. Nvvchar. 12:18, 22 June 2016 (UTC)

Thanks for the changes. This can be promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:15, 23 June 2016 (UTC)

• Thank you.Nvvchar. 07:06, 23 June 2016 (UTC)