Talk:Ruach Minyan
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Advertising style / Notability?[edit]
I am sure this is a great organization, but there is just a bit too much advertising language here. A "spirited" service and "a warm and friendly environment that welcomes and enriches..." is not exactly what one would expect in terms of an encyclopedic description. Neither is a sentence like "The Minyan derives its strength and warmth from each of its participants, continuously committing to create an inviting communal space to share our ideas, aspirations, prayers and meals." The first person language
("It welcomes people to come to whatever parts of our programs that interest them.") hints at the source.
Also, I must admit that I have my doubts as to the notability of this organization.
The link to its own website is not working (leads only to the website of the affiliated Adas Israel congregation). --84.190.89.103 (talk) 16:29, 21 October 2016 (UTC)