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GA Review

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Reviewer: MisterBee1966 (talk) 09:56, 18 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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  • Franz von Hipper was its first commander. I think this is notable.
  • Kaiser's Cup; a footnaote could help to understand what that was
  • Could you add the crew size to the infobox?

MisterBee1966 (talk) 10:11, 18 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

yes, sorry!

  • she was christioned by Alfred von Schlieffen see Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, 212
  • according to Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 211, she was named after cruiser frigate Gneisenau
  • sea trials between 26 March and mid July 1908 in the Baltic Sea, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
  • officially joined the High Sea Fleet on 12 July, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212
  • she won the Kaiser Cup twice in 08/09 for armored cruisers and in twice again 10/11 for cruiser squadrons (with Scharnhorst). This is a bit unclear in the article, Hildebrand, Röhr and Steinmetz Volume 3 pages 212

I think that's it MisterBee1966 (talk) 06:19, 19 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Nice article! MisterBee1966 (talk) 11:35, 21 February 2011 (UTC)[reply]