Talk:SMS Sebenico/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

Might as well make it a hat trick.

This article is in good shape. A few comments from me:

• no duplicate links, dabs or redirects
• suggest in an unsuccessful attempt to improve theher speed.of the design, as the use of design twice jars a bit
  • Good idea
• suggest mentioning what sort of guns they were, muzzle or breech loaders?
  • Fixed
• the gun calibers in the body and infobox don't match, 9 cm vs 87 mm and 7 cm vs 66 mm
  • Fixed
• where were the 47 mm QF guns installed?
  • Added
• suggest "included the ironclad"
  • Good catch
• per the Zara review, I think the image license should be PD-because?
  • Yup, fixed there

That's me done, placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 03:21, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

Thanks PM. Parsecboy (talk) 12:06, 7 August 2017 (UTC)

This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by an appropriately licensed image with an appropriate caption. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 04:18, 8 August 2017 (UTC)