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GA Review

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Reviewer: PCN02WPS (talk · contribs) 04:56, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


Hi there, I'll be reviewing this nomination in the coming days. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 04:56, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your patience, I've left my comments/concerns and I'll place the nomination on hold for you to address them. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 19:07, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
My suggestions have been addressed, so I'm happy to pass this article as a GA! Well done. PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 04:18, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Lead/infobox

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  • One additional note for the lead: in order to make the lead agree with the body of the article, clarify that she was sold to buyers in the Philippines, rather than just saying "she was sold to the Philippines", which could imply she was sold to the government or some depiction of the country itself as an entity.
  •  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:30, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Description

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As built

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1930 conversion...

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History as floating power plant

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Korea service

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  • "the loss of electricity that was generated by the first generator." → I would find a word to replace "generated" to cut down on repetition.




Later service

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Notes and references

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Images

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Comments

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