Talk:SS West Cheswald/GA1
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[edit]Hi! I will be reviewing this article for GA, and should have the full review up within a couple of hours. Dana boomer (talk) 20:18, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- In the Arctic convoy section, you say "Her closest class occurred". I'm not sure what this is supposed to say, or I'd change it :)
- I don't know what sort of brain lock-up occurred there. It should have said "her closest call occurred". Now fixed. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- I was pretty sure it was something like this, but I figured it was probably better that you made sure :) Dana boomer (talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- I don't know what sort of brain lock-up occurred there. It should have said "her closest call occurred". Now fixed. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- In the Arctic convoy section, you say "Her closest class occurred". I'm not sure what this is supposed to say, or I'd change it :)
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Just one minor prose issue to be addressed before I pass this article for GA, so I'm putting it on hold. Drop me a note if you have any questions. Dana boomer (talk) 20:35, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- Reply above. — Bellhalla (talk) 20:59, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
- Everything looks good now, so I'm passing the article. Dana boomer (talk) 21:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)