Talk:Sacred Heart of Jesus Cathedral, Shenyang
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Review
Excellent work!--Yidan Liu (talk) 13:43, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Review[edit]
Hello, I have read you article and I find it very interesting and well written!
My only suggestion is to rephrase the first sentence of the "Historical data" section: "In the west of Tianyouguan Street, in the first year of Guangxu, a hundred and twenty houses were built, three Western priests, one Chinese priest, and seven hundred parishioners.", because I do not find it very clear.
Good job :) BenedettaFlam (talk) 14:50, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
Observations and suggestions for improvements[edit]
The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2022.
The article needs a mild English revision to make it more fluent. There are no relevant errors or typos, except the name of the architect who is not Henry but Henri Lamasse. Fixing it would help also for a stronger cross-referencing with other Wikipedia articles. For the rest, the article is well structured and adequately matches scientific writing in all the different parts. --BarettoDiArchitettura (talk) 08:34, 21 July 2022 (UTC)