Talk:Safe (Fringe)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: ChessFiends (talk · contribs) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Very few problems, definitely GA quality TV episode article, I'll point out a few nitpicky tweaks to be made.

It begins when "a group use" when a group uses
"He obtained this technology two episodes ago, in "The Equation"." Plot summaries are supposed to be in-universe descriptions, so either remove this sentence, hatnote it or say something like he obtained this tech earlier with how he did it.
"Loeb shoots him in the head" i've never seen this episode, does he do this courteously, to save him pain?
link Frankfurt if it's the city
"tells Jones the job" that the job
"a word given to Jones in the episode "In Which We Meet Mr. Jones"" this seems more important information, maybe add this as a hatnote, or parenthesize it?

That's about it, well written stuff. ChessFiends (talk) 19:44, 3 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing. I believe I have addressed all of your concerns. Ruby 2010/2013 02:09, 4 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]