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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:05, 28 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments[edit]

  • "who also co-star" → "who also co-stars"
  • "V. K. Murthy in Andheri and Dhakuria completed the principal photography" → "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with cinematographer V. K. Murthy" or "Principal photography took place in Andheri and Dhakuria with director of photography V. K. Murthy"
  • "at the its factory" – reword
  • "an trainee" → "a trainee"
  • "he was surprise" → "he was surprised"
  • "concentrated on the screenplay writing" → "concentrated on writing the screenplay"
  • "he arrived for" → "he arrived"
  • "had potential to boost her career" → "had the potential to boost her career"
  • Add a comma after "Bibi for Kumari".
  • "consectitive" → "consecutive"
  • "with adding" → "by adding"
  • Remove the comma after "a new climax".
  • "by both" → "from both"
  • "last major contribution for" → "last major contribution to"
  • The non-free use rationales for every image look good.
  • Checked most sources; everything is properly cited. Great work on this article!
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:32, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:54, 3 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress[edit]

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed