Talk:Salil Ankola/GA1

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Reviewer: Vibhijain (talk · contribs) 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Karachi is the lead should link to the stadium in which the match was played.
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"from the side after subsequent series'." - Remove '
- My bad, removed —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
At age 28 --> At the age of 28
- Placed a comma after 28 —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:09, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"producing a few Hindi films" is misleading as he was an actor anf not the producer.
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"He made his first-class debut at the age of 20 for Mumbai in 1988–89." - Source needed
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
BCCP should link to whatever it refers to
- I could not find any link whatsoever, it's just a local team like Boar President's XI in India —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"both would go on to become great cricketers on their own ways" - not needed and possibly POV
- Rephrased the sentence —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
domestic and overseas tours --> domestic series and overseas tours
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
You should tell the series for which Ankola was seleted
- Which series are you talking about? —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  - "Despite being selected in the Test squads on domestic series and overseas tours" - Mention the series.
    - The source doesn't clearly mention which are those series. —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 07:36, 29 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
he along with ... Bahutule were trained under Frank Tyson --> he along with ... Bahutule was trained under Frank Tyson
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 18:07, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Shortly after the Pakistan ... a daughter and a son. - The source doesn't says anything about Pak series.
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
In a match that India heavily lost - Either quote heavily lost or use something more encyclopedic.
- Done —Vensatry _{(Ping me)} 11:46, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Will see if I can find any other problem, but otherwise the article is fine. ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 11:46, 28 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Article passed Congrats! :) ♛♚★Vaibhav Jain★♚♛ ^Talk ^Email 11:59, 30 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]