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GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will try to start this review tonight, depending on what's going on. --K. Peake 18:47, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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 Done with some minor wording changes. Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Background

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 Done Grk1011 (talk) 01:06, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Before Eurovision

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  • Img looks good!

Digital Battle

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  • Remove Italian singer introduction to Senhit since it is clear she's the same person as Senit due to the pseudonym mention, plus remove the pipe here
  • Remove wikilink on Eurovision Song Contest 2011
  • Remove pipe on "Stand By"
  • "for their preferred song." → "for the song."
  • [6] can remain in its first position but should be invoked second at the end of the para and not the penultimate sentence, due to backing the last two up
  • "Serhat, and Valentina Monetta and Jimmy Wilson," → "Serhat as well as Monetta and Wilson,"
  • Add (2019) in brackets rather than writing from 2019
  • "reported that it received" → "reported that the contest received" because otherwise it sounds like you are talking about the song
  • The table info should be written out in prose probably around this point, as two results is not enough to warrant a table
  • "for the year's participation." → "for the nation's participation in the 2020 contest."

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

At Eurovision

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  • "on 12 and 14 May," → "on 12 and 14 May, respectively,"
  • "the top ten countries from" → "the top 10 countries from" per MOS:NUM
  • "The EBU announced soon after" → "The European Broadcasting Union (EBU) announced thereafter" with the wikilink
  • "that were to" → "that were set to"

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Alternative song contests

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 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 15.8%!!!
  • Remove or replace ref 7 per WP:RSP
  • Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 12
  • Change 'reaky!' to 'Freaky!' on ref 13

 Done Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Final comments and verdict

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@Kyle Peake: I believe I addressed all of your concerns! Let me know if I missed anything. Regarding a potential WP:GT, in your experience, would I be able to submit this grouping, omitting the ongoing 2021 article or would I have to wait until May/June for that to become a GA? This topic will have yearly additions, so I just wonder if there are only certain windows of time where nominations would be successful because of that. Grk1011 (talk) 12:48, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Grk1011  Pass now and regarding a potential GT, you can nominate it before the 2021 contest like I did with Kanye West's studio albums even though Donda is pending release. However, you can use GT addition to add the 2021 contest when it becomes a GA for stopping the topic being demoted. --K. Peake 14:33, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]