Talk:Sandro Mamukelashvili

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Review: April 21, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to be reviewing this article as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 14:06, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

Wikilink points per game
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Early life and high school career[edit]

Wikilink Soviet national basketball team to Soviet Union women's national basketball team
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"He competed on the U17, U18 and U19 teams and helped to finish third place in the national finals." - helped whom?
- The Teams. Clarified. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"and introduced him to several NBA players like Stephen Curry." - such as
- Rephrased. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink NBA
- Ok. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"He speaks English, Georgian, Russian, and Italian." - can be He is fluent in
- Probably various levels of fluency, but changed. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:39, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

College career[edit]

Wiklink the first mention of the terms points, rebound and blocks to help non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"In the summer of 2019," - avoid mentioning seasons per MOS:SEASON
- Changed to "Following his sophomore season." ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"while making 61% of his shots from the field and 60% from behind the arc." - should be percent per MOS:PERCENT
- OK. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"but did not hire an agent." - Wikilink agent to Sports agent
- Done. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:43, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

National team career[edit]

"In the summer of 2018," - avoiding using seasons
- Changed to "July 2018". ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Career statstics[edit]

The table of his college stats should be referenced to reliable sources
- Cited to SportsReference. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Am going to place the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 17:14, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Have addressed your concerns. ~EDDY ^{(talk/contribs)}~ 18:48, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 21 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]