I've made an first pass at cleaning up some of the awful grammar on this page, but any improvements that can be made would be very much appreciated. Deelay58 (talk)
OK, I just did a rundown of the entire thing. Mainly spelling and grammar, but also fixed or removed broken or dead links. Added "external links" section at the bottom as those two didn't have Wiki pages. Perhaps you or someone would like to give it a look now and determine whether the copy editing template message is ready to be removed. Nadeem.navidi (talk) 03:46, 31 May 2017 (UTC)
