Talk:Scream (Kelis song)/GA2
Appearance
GA Review
[edit]GA toolbox |
---|
Reviewing |
Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch
Reviewer: Jezhotwells (talk) 01:02, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
I shall be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria, following its nomination for Good Article status.
Disambiguations: none found
Linkrot: none found. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:05, 31 March 2011 (UTC) Substantive review to be posted within a day or so. Jezhotwells (talk) 01:05, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
Checking against GA criteria
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Many other critics stated how the song's composition could be split into different sections, ungrammatical
- "Scream" is an up-tempo, synthpop,[1] electro-dance[2] and techno[3] song with elements of house[4] and soft-rock.[3] So, are you trying to say that it is a mish-mash of several music genres?
- The song received generally mixed to positive reviews. What is that supposed to mean?
- Sarah Bee of BBC Music agreed compared the song to works by Dutch house DJ Fedde Le Grand, ungrammatical
- "Scream" was recorded at 'Casa de Kelis' and mixed at 'Gum Prod Studio' in Paris. Incorrect use of quotes, what is 'Casa de Kelis' supposed to mean?
- This fails the reasonably well written criterion. Should never have been nominated without a thorough copy-edit.
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- Shopping sites such as 7digital and amazon are not reliable sources. Please see many archived discussions at WP:RSN
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Details of production of the song are needed. Trivia such as the nipple incident are irrelevant.
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Tagged and captioned.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- ON hold for a thorough copy-edit, reference improvements, and broader coverage. Seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:45, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
- Well, it has been a week and no response has been made, or any edits made to the article, even though the nominator has been editing throughout the period. A note was left on the nominator's talk page seven days ago, so I shall not be listing at this time. Jezhotwells (talk) 23:18, 6 April 2011 (UTC)
- ON hold for a thorough copy-edit, reference improvements, and broader coverage. Seven days. Jezhotwells (talk) 09:45, 31 March 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: