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Article Needs Attention

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This article is a mess, even when it isn't being vandalized. It's incoherent. It needs many citations. It reads like an advertisement written by a 13 year old. It's certainly no credit to the aquarium.

I've made an extensive tidy up on the 27.01.08 and 29.02.08 ZoofanNZ (talk) 00:42, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

To Do

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  • Citations - Especially from websites other than the Aquarium's own.
  • Expansion - Intro needs expansion as well as other sections, (beyond my knowledge).
  • Images - A few more images of the exhibits in the aquarium, (the fish bowl?) would be good (please load to Wiki Commons and link).
  • Copy edit - I've tried to rewrite any sentences that read like a fan site or advertisement and to write in British English, further copy edit by those with better english skills would be appreciated. ZoofanNZ (talk) 00:41, 29 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Enough citations?

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I added a few new citations to different parts of the article. Are there any more citations that should be added before the banner goes away? Technodisney (talk) 09:11, 9 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]