Talk:Secrets (Regard and Raye song)/GA1
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:36, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
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I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 10:36, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Infobox looks good!
"It was written by" → "The song was written by" to make it clear what you are referring to"The song was released as" → "It was released as""It is an English-language deep and retro-sounding club, house and R&B song, touching on" → "An English-language deep and retro-sounding club, house and R&B song, it touches on""was met with critical acclaim" → "received critical acclaim""the music, production as well as Raye's" → "the music, production and Raye's"Mention some of the notable countries it charted in""Secrets" received a nomination" → "The song received a nomination"
Background and composition
[edit]- Any actual info you can add about the background of how the collaborators came together or what the basis of the song was?
Swap the release sentence with the writing/production one since that came before the releasePipe bass line to Bassline""I had written the top line of [" → ""I'd written the top line [of " per paraphrasing of the source
Reception and promotion
[edit]Corona should be capitalised per the source"the song as "powerful track" → "the song as a "powerful piece" per the sourceMention that the Dance charts are US ones"and the United Kingdom." → "and the UK." per the full name having been used last time"Preceded by the release of a lyrics video" → "Preceded by the release of a lyric video" with the wikilink per MOS:LINK2SECT"an accompanying music video for "Secrets" was" → "a music video for "Secrets" was"The word both is not needed before their roles
Track listing
[edit]- Good
Charts
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]- For Czech Republic, Mexico and Slovakia, should more than one chart be included?
Remove the US Streaming Hot Dance/Electronic Streaming Songs chart per the main one being included
Year-end charts
[edit]Remove the Portugal ones per WP:Record charts#Charts with more than 200 positions
Certifications
[edit]- Good
Release history
[edit]Wikilink Ministry of Sound
See also
[edit]- Good
References
[edit]- Copyvio score looks great at 30.7%!!!
Radiomonitor is not the correct publisher on ref 4- What exactly makes ref 5 a reliable source?
- Removed. --Iaof2017 (talk) 13:02, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
Ref 48 should only cite IFPI Greece as publisher with the wikilink since the full name is never usedFix MOS:CAPS issues with ref 51Remove wikilink on TopHit for ref 90
Final comments and verdict
[edit]On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 11:58, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- Hello @Kyle Peake: thank you for this review. I will continue with the remaining issues after a few moments. Iaof2017 (talk) 13:19, 2 October 2022 (UTC)
- ✓ Pass now, kudos to you for the quick response! --K. Peake 07:55, 3 October 2022 (UTC)
- Cool, thank you. :D Iaof2017 (talk) 11:51, 3 October 2022 (UTC)