Talk:Serious Sam VR: The Last Hope/GA1
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV (talk · contribs) 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
I'll review this one as well.--AlexandraIDV 11:22, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
- Alen Ladavac, Jonas Kyratzes and Verena Kyratzes are unsourced (OK to source the game's credits)
- You mention an arcade version in the development section, should this not be in the infobox (and lead) as well?
- Not really: Most details about this version are unknown/unclear. Based on the source alone, I cannot say whether it was ever released. The date was only inferred from the site's metadata. Instead of including it up here, I amended the phrasing the "Development and release" section.
- Fun fact: That about page on Croteam's website was the only Google Search result for the version before I added it here. IceWelder [✉] 15:12, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
Lead
- would add "game" in the first sentence
- If you want to use the acronym VR in the lead, please add
(VR)
after the first mention of virtual reality - Because you use the phrase "including bosses", it is already clear that there are multiple enemy types, so you can strike the word "various"
The Last Hope was developed by Croteam VR,
fine to mention that the division was established after VR experiments, but you don't need to repeat that they are the developers, since this is already mentioned in the first sentence- Mention that HTC Vive and Oculus Rift are VR headsets
- Done, though not linked per MOS:SEAOFBLUE. IceWelder [✉] 15:12, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
Gameplay
- Is matchmaking the only way of playing in multiplayer? ie, you can't invite a friend to a game?
Development and release
added rudimentary support for both VR headsets to The Talos Principle.
Would suggest "to their game The Talos Principle" to make the connection stronger. Additionally, the timeline is unclear here - was Talos Principle still in development at this point, or was VR support added as a post-release update?since good games, such as The Last Hope,
strike "such as The Last Hope", we can't call a game objectively good in Wikipedia's voice. Also clarify that "good games would sell themselves" is Kotlar's opinion
- Variable Rate Supersampling is tech jargon, can you add a brief explanation of what it is in the article? If there is a WP article with a more in-depth explanation of it, link that, too
Reception
- Seems fine
References
- This is not a GA criterion, and will not affect the outcome of this review, but I will mention it anyway: in some references, you list publishers as works - Autodesk is the company publishing "PART I - Serious Sam VR", Croteam is the company publishing "SSVR: The Last Hope Gets a Release Date as Lead Designer, Davor Hunski, Recaps Early Access – Part 1" - and for "This is Real – Croteam", you have HTC Vive listed as the author.
Images
- The cover art does not have a caption - this would be a good opportunity to identify the characters depicted
- Free use rationales are fine
Looks pretty good! I'll put this on hold for seven days - ping me when you have addressed the issues I brought up or if you have any questions.--AlexandraIDV 11:54, 2 November 2020 (UTC)
- @Alexandra IDV: Thanks for your review. It is always a pleasure working with you. I made the requested changes and left some per-note comments as usual. Regards, IceWelder [✉] 15:12, 2 November 2020 (UTC)