Talk:Sexual selection in flowering plants

Peer Review

The overall structure of your article was very well done. I found the article easy to navigate and the flow for the most part was good. I identified a few instances in the article where you start the sentences with words like "therefore", "however", and "for example". Try to limit the use of these and rephrase the sentence to function without them, they cause an unnecessary pause with the comma being at the beginning of the sentence and disrupts the overall flow of the article. The information was provided well with examples linked to your topic which greatly helps the understanding of the subject. You may need to adjust your structure when explaining the various sexual dimorphisms of flowering plants by linking them more directly to a specific section. In this same section provide more of a definition for each dimorphism discussed, it will help the overall understanding of each one. Overall I enjoyed your article and found it very informative on flowering plants.