Talk:Shattered Glass (Britney Spears song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:11, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Dablinks - one found and fixed
- ELs are clean
Lead[edit]
- Add "Unusual You" as the A-side in infobox
- Not done I think that only works for the singles template. I tried putting it in, but nothing showed up. I might be doing it wrong. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Strange, I thought it had the parameter. Take a look at my proposal if ya want to. :D
- Release date in infobox should be September 15, 2009
- In the second sentence you should use the stage names for Dr. Luke and Benny Blanco so that readers do not think their were five people involved, instead of three
- Done Changed to Lukasz "Dr. Luke" Gottwald and same for Blanco. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Link teen-pop, dance and disco
- Link Auto-Tune
- Link B-side
- Link Unusual You
- Link component charts to Billboard charts
- Link the different charts
Background and composition[edit]
- Reduce File:05 Shattered Glass.ogg to about 65kbps and less than 17.2 seconds
- Done --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- The caption is a mess - rewrite it
- Link pop
- Link guitar
- Link rift
- What is a "jagged" verse?
- Well, since I'm pretty sure they were speaking of her vocals, I changed it to "jagged and distorted vocals in the chorus" --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Auto-Tuned in lead, auto-tuned here - be consistent
- "though it has been noted" - by who?
- "The song takes influences from teen pop..." - takes influences?
- The sentence about lyrics is exactly the same as in the lead
- Fixed Less detailed in sentence in the lead. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
Reception[edit]
- Repeating the quote in the image caption is a bit POV
- You need to identify writers here, as newspapers don't form opinions; their writers do
- said the song and 'Womanizer' "use their pulsing..." - Womanizer should have double quote marks ("), and reword so that you don't have two quote marks next to each other
- The Daily News ref should be next to its quote
- Link Billboard charts
- How do you know that it is digital downloads? Maybe include a bit about the Digital Songs charting here
- Because it has to be. There is no sign of any other kind of release her except for digital download on the album. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- OK, but I maintain that the Digital Songs info would be better up here. See...errm...Bigger (Justin Bieber song) for an example. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:06, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
- Link Billboard Hot 100
- " remaining on the chart for that week" - remove
- Fixed Changed it. Now say "before dropping off and reappearing for the week of..." --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- "and then reappearing the week after next" - a date would be better
- The Billboard ref does not support the statement
- If you are speaking of the weeks it charted, you will need to look at the visualizer using the arrow on the left
- "was also able to chart" → charted
- pop chart → Pop Songs
- digital songs → Hot Digital Songs
- Link Canadian Hot 100
- "and thirty-six" → and number thirty-six
- Canadian digital songs chart → Hot Canadian Digital Singles
Track listing[edit]
- What happened to New Zealand?
- Done
- Link Unusual You
Credits and personnel[edit]
- Link names
- Link vocals to singing (for Spears)
Charts[edit]
- Why not use the Billboard page for refs?
- Because Billboard fails to properly archive most songs that are not singles that chart. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 23:11, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
References[edit]
- The dates are incorrectly formatted here. Either YYYY-MM-DD or Month Day, Year
- Popmatters → PopMatters
- Discogs is not reliable
- ABC News is not in print; unitalicise
- It's not italicized as far as I can see when looking at it in the "work" section of the cite. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 23:10, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Acharts is unreliable
- Not done Per WP:GOODCHARTS when there is no other way to substitute an unlicensed chart, it may be used. --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 23:10, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Please add publishers to refs (if applicable)
- Since many of the "works" over lap with "publishers" they are listed as "publisher" --ĈÞЯİŒ 1ооо 23:10, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
- Remove the main Britney navbox