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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 22:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC) Hey! I'm back from my vacation. I'll be reviewing again. And i'll start wtih this... --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 22:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Review[edit]

# Section Statement Issue(s)
1 Lead "She's a Mess" garnered generally mixed reviews from music critics; some criticized the lack of identity, however others named it one of the album's best tracks." Maybe we can enhance the prose:
  • "She's a Mess" garnered generally mixed reviews from music critics, who commented about the "lack of identity" of the song, while others named it one of the album's best tracks."
  • I think the "lack of identity" should be quoted, as it's likely to be challenged. Also, this info doesn't appear on the article body.
2 Writing and recording "All music and instruments were played by Mars and Levine."
  • I don't know yet exactly what, but something seems out of place... Iit may be a little confusing.

Nothing else to be noted here. Also, i felt weird when reading the article and without the Background section. of course, this is just a comment about past reviews XD --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 22:35, 1 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I can't really source the "lack of identity" since it's a conclusion. Rewritten last sentence of the lead. Till I Go Home talk edits 01:21, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
but a conclusion of yours? Remember avoiding OR (Just commenting)... I think it is better now. --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 01:43, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"wouldn't have sounded much different coming from any other girl band", "just about good enough to forget the absurdity of it being a Sugababes track". Till I Go Home talk edits 01:57, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I changed it again, except this time with "originality". Till I Go Home talk edits 02:00, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, now there won't be doubts about if its OR or not. Now it is clearer :) --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 02:10, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Verdict[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Final comment: I'm a little concerned about the WP:NSONGS guideline since it hasn't charted, but it's my personal opinion and then kind of irrelevant here. The article meets all the criteria, and as a result, it is promoted to GA status. Regards. --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 16:02, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Till I Go Home talk edits 16:16, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.