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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC) I am very excited about these sorts of articles. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead & infobox

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There needs to be mention of the class' namesake within the body of the article. Already mentioned(?) in 2nd paragraph, last line.

I consider the body of the article to exclude the lead and info box. Sorry for the turbidity :)
 Done :)

Design and description

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You will need to explain (wikilink) mentions of LAN and of chapati- and dosa-.  Done

General characteristics and propulsion

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Fine here.

Electronics and sensors

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Fine.

Armament

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Instead of Western, you could simply say Israeli.
Hal Dhruv or Sea King? Are they interchangeable? Or do they vary by ship?  Done

Construction and service

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Please wikilink the JMSDF.  Done
"...deployed in the South China Sea." In what capacity?  Done

Ships

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The next two sections are fine.

Conclusion

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Very nice article. It has been delightful both observing and participating in the expansion of the GA Indian Warship section. Once everything has been fixed, I will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:08, 10 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]