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The article mentions what he did before and after Kristalknact, but does not mention what it is or its significance to him. After reading the page for Kristalknact, it is understandable why it is significant, but I feel the author should have tied it into the article. If I had more knowledge on the subject, I might do it myself. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:15, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I have removed this sentence. "they succeeded in both children bring before the outbreak of war with the Kindertransport to safety in England". If anyone has any idea what it means, they can fix it and include it in the article. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:17, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think this article was translated from German using one of those hopeless online translators. Maybe if someone could translate it back to German and then back to English sensibly, it might mean something? Bretonbanquet (talk) 23:19, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Yea looks that way. Well, I'm doing the best I can to make sense of it. If anyone disagrees with any of the edits, I'm okay with them bringing it up here and changing it. DaffyBridge (talk) 23:21, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I think you're doing a fine job! I looked at it and decided I might make it worse by attempting to clean it up, so I just added the tag. Bretonbanquet (talk) 23:24, 31 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]
