Talk:Sin and Punishment/GA1

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Reviewer: ProtoDrake (talk · contribs) 15:58, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

I'll be back in a few days with a full review. If I'm not, please ping. --ProtoDrake (talk) 15:58, 12 November 2017 (UTC)

Review

• Minor helpful note; the following reference confirms that Suzuki was a character designer - Sahdev, Ishaan (8 December 2014). "Sin & Punishment 2 Art Director Designed Enemies For Xenoblade Chronicles X". Siliconera. Archived from the original on 15 December 2014. Retrieved 11 July 2017. {{cite web}}: Unknown parameter |deadurl= ignored (|url-status= suggested) (help)
  • Added the ref into the body. Not sure if you're asking to add it into the infobox. Since he wasn't credited as lead artist, I didn't add him to the infobox. But if you think he should be added, I can add him.
• "...Armed Volunteers was a her ploy to groom Saki..." - Correct to either use "a" or "her".
  • Done
• " than any in any of Treasure's previous projects" - Remove first "any".
  • Done
• "... supervising the project if he wasn't skilled enough to play it." - Please replace contraction with "was not".
  • Done
• "console's life cycle was approaching its end.[15][8]" - Switch the refs around.
  • Done
• " and in Japan on April 25, 2016.[24][25][23]" - Switch the refs around again.
  • Done
• All sources check okay, all links archived. One note; the American version of the Iwata Asks doesn't work properly when archived, but the [ UK version] does with Archive.is. I can assure you that Archive.is is currently approved for use by Wikipedia. Here's the archived version of the Iwata Asks interview, and I've taken care to archive all six pages. If you prefer to use WebCite, I can provide the archive links for that too. There are also a lot of links that aren't properly formatted, but that's not something to hold up an otherwise-good nomination with.
  • Done, I used the archive.is link you provided, thanks. What formatting issues did you notice?

That's all I saw that's holding this article back. Once these have been addressed, this can pass. --ProtoDrake (talk) 17:09, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: Sorry, forgot to ping you. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:41, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

@ProtoDrake: Replied. TarkusAB^talk 00:40, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: I htink that's fine. I'll Pass this article as a GA. Oh, and the problem with the Iwata Asks interview was that the text of the interview was refusing to load in the archived version. --ProtoDrake (talk) 12:09, 16 November 2017 (UTC)