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The lead is concise and not overly detailed while still containing the information that is later presenting in the wiki page. You did a good job of making it clear why Sina Shamsavari is notable and had a strong introductory sentence.
Content
The content was overall really great and proved itself to be consistently relevant and up-to-date.
I would find a way to rephrase this to make it sound slightly more professional, if that makes sense - "Growing up during a time where homophobia was prevalent"
Tone and Balance
I think you do a very good job of balancing keeping a neutral tone while also expressing what makes this individual notable and interesting.
Sources and References
I think pretty much everything is backed up by sources. There are a few things included that are a little more general that I feel might benefit from some citations and references just to ensure there's no issues of credibility, but I overall I think it's really strong in this area. All the links I checked worked :)
Organization
I think your organization is perfect. The only area I recommend consider moving around a little bit is your notable works area. If you're gonna add more, it should end up great, but if you're going to leave that amount, I would find another way to format it so it doesn't look like such a short list, which might hurt the credibility a bit. Besides that, really great!
Images and Media
So, I'm trying to figure out how to work around copy-writed images myself, but if you can figure it out, an image of his characters or something would be really cool to add!
For New Articles
I think you'll need more sources overall, but for this far into the project I think you have a great amount and are satisfying the notability requirement!
Overall Impressions
Overall, I think you're doing really well. I think once you add some more information, like images and some new sources, it's going to be really really great. The article does feel like it needs a bit more, but I think that's more so a consequence of having more time to finish the project than not having any other information. Good luck for the rest of the project! You're doing great!
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2022 and 6 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Whizkid32 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Empiretr00per, Elid 389.
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 August 2022 and 6 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Whizkid32 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Empiretr00per, Elid 389.