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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:28, 20 April 2015 (UTC)
- Lead
- the Uí Ímair. → the House of Uí Ímair ?
- was probably → was most probably
- battle → battles
- as king there, → as king,
- What is an over-king?
- raid on → raid in
- though this did not last long and he soon reverted to paganism. → though he soon reverted to paganism.
- succeeded as king by → succeeded by
- Background
- Here you say overking, in the lead you hyphenate it?
- Máel Finnia mac Flannacán → Should mac be capitalised?
- and in 914 a → and in 914 a,
- such as the Annals of Ulster are → Comma after Ulster
- Biography
- indicating he → indicating that he
- and won a victory, → and claimed victory, (a victory is a victory, so it's obvious that you win a victory.)
- This was followed by another victory, → This was followed by another at the Battle of Confey,
- King Augaire was killed and the campaign, which had lasted around three weeks, was effectively over. → This needs re-phrasing.
- changed "This was followed by another victory, this time at Cenn Fuait, against Augaire mac Ailella, overking of Leinster. King Augaire was killed and the campaign, which had lasted around three weeks, was effectively over." to "This was followed by another at the Battle of Confey (also known as the Battle of Cenn Fuait), against Augaire mac Ailella, overking of Leinster, who died in the battle. Augaire's death marked the end of effective opposition to the Vikings' return to Ireland." Retroplum (talk) 15:41, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
- there exist coins → there are coins in existence
- These coins therefore, might → These coins might
- Outcome
On hold. — ₳aron 14:32, 25 April 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for being so prompt. Passing. — ₳aron 09:46, 26 April 2015 (UTC)
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