Talk:Smithwick's/Archives/2017
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Company or beer…?
This article seems to mix the use of “Smithwick’s” for the company and the beer at will, to some confusion, e.g.: Smithwick's [the brewery] was founded by John Smithwick in 1710. It[pronoun should refer back to the brewery, but actually context means the beer] was originally brewed… etc. It’s also hard to reconcile that the history laid out, stretching back centuries, relates to a beer which was “originally created as a special brew for the first Kilkenny Beer Festival”, which itself was founded in 1972. Jock123 (talk) 07:55, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
- Copyedited, hopefully reducing any confusion. BastunĖġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 11:18, 4 April 2017 (UTC)