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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:18, 22 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Overall: I would suggest a general copyedit of the prose before the article makes it to the main page. Even though this is not a DYK criterion, the article would benefit from a quick once-over. Tomobe03 (talk) 10:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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No images used in the hook - so that segment is moot
QPQ met - reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Mayoralty of Bernie Sanders
I did not find the site in the list of mirrors here, but let me check some more.Tomobe03 (talk) 13:26, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
comment: Earwig's copyvio detector flagged this article [1] as a suspected copyvio, but this appears to be a mirror. I have confirmed this with User:Diannaa and they will flag the mirror as such appropriately to avoid future confusion. Tomobe03 (talk) 14:47, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
comment: The phrase "Clove Governor" is found in the offered source as "gubernur Cengkeh" (p.28), AGF on foreign-language source
Regardless of the above, could you please check these sentences in Military career section:
Less than a year, in 1963, he was transferred to... - is this meant to be "Less than a year later..."?
In 1967, he was reassigned to East Java, promoted to Mayor, ... - did you mean Major? Tomobe03 (talk) 14:24, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I am satisfied that the DYK criteria are met. Tomobe03 (talk) 17:11, 20 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
I will review this article. This is my first bio GAN I review, and I would love to learn many things from this decision. GeraldWL 15:02, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Keep either "Indonesian" or "Javanese." "Javanese" already covers Indonesia as a whole. In addition, recommend linking. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Paragraphs 1, 2, and 3 used two citations, placed them at the same place. Mind relocating to the claim(s) it supports? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done except for the 3rd paragraph; citation 1 and 2 is reinforcing each other regarding the dates and fact. --Regards, Jeromi Mikhael(marhata) 13:47, 17 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"After the war"-- what war? GeraldWL 07:28, 15 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Three redlinks. Either interwiki link, create stub (if person warrants a WP article), or remove redlinks. GeraldWL 15:07, 14 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
"As a result, 12 large villages in the X Valley were swallowed by the Earth." What is "X Valley" and suggest rewording the metaphoric "swallowed by the Earth." GeraldWL 09:10, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Done Ah, my apologies. The X Valley was without name prior to the 2000s; it is now known as the Baliem Valley. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael(marhata) 12:35, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Jeromi Mikhael, last thing: in paragraph 3, ref 31 and 27 is used at the same time. Similar case at "Death", last sentence. Mind relocating or removing one of them, if appropriate? GeraldWL 12:53, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Jeromi Mikhael, see "Irian Jaya earthquake" above. After that is resolved, I'll do a linking copyedit, and that should make it for a good article. Apologies for the wait. GeraldWL 09:11, 18 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]