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You used the same word earlier in the sentence and neither alters the meaning, so switch to following or something similar. --K. Peake 19:47, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
[1] is not needed in the lead since that info is in the body and refs are discouraged here anyway
There's a direct quotation in double quotation marks, so it'd best stay.
No there is not, you are thinking of [2]. --K. Peake 19:47, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The ref in the first sentence should solely be at the end of it
Done.
"his songs at the" →"his songs at locations such as the"
Edited.
"during the eighteenth century." → "during the 18th century." per MOS:NUM
Done.
Remove comma after his employer
The comma separates the noun phrase from another noun phrase which explains it.
It is not needed for introductions like this in the body, as writing the role out and then a name makes it clear. --K. Peake 19:47, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done, but the issue isn't clarity but naturalness.
The punctuation is a natural and necessary pause here, as both the song and the poem are set to that tune: we mustn't group the poem with the concluding phrase, or we'd leave the song stranded with no target.
Only use Bellman's surname on the img text, like the previous one
On hold until everything is resolved; your response time has been very impressive! --K. Peake 19:47, 29 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Chiswick Chap✓Pass now, I don't take any issues with the usage of that upon second consideration and regarding the fullname of the character being used, that is a Wiki policy when names are not real ones. --K. Peake 10:24, 30 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]