Talk:Something Nice Back Home/GA1

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GA Review[edit]

I'll be doing the GA review for this article. Overall, it looks really good, but here are some minor suggestions for improvement:

  • If there are going to be sources in the lead, all the info subject to be challenged should be sourced. For example, "thirteen million American viewers—the smallest audience for an original episode of Lost in the show's history." should have a citation.
  • In the lead, it might be a good idea to clarify that Christian is Jack's dead father. That will make it clearer for someone who may not watch the show.
  • "The episode had been written" --> "The episode was written" and "Shooting had begun by March 24" --> "Shooting began by March 24" - it sounds cleaner
  • Over half of the sentences in the reception section begin "(Person) of (publication)...". Is there any other way to word these sorts of sentences?
  • The large numbers need commas where there are currently spaces. See MOS:NUM#Large numbers.

Great job. The article will be on hold for seven days. Nikki311 01:02, 12 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

With the exception of your first suggestion, all concerns have been addressed. The only citations in the lead references claims that are not repeated later in the article. –thedemonhog talk • edits 04:11, 12 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Okay. Fair enough. Great work. The article has passed. Nikki311 02:21, 13 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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