Talk:St Mary's Church, Hinckley

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My Opinion on the Article[edit]

This article is clearly very detailed, which is good, however it is lacking in citations, especially secondary sources (see WP:RS). The rule on Wikipedia is that everything you write has to have a reliable source about it, and there are some sections here with no sources at all. Also, the opening paragraph probably needs a small rewrite, because currently the bit on the coffee shop sounds like an advertisement. Also, the names of sections shouldn't be in all capital letters, but that's a minor thing.

One more thing, with references it's good practice to not just list the url, but also url/title/publisher/date/accessdate. This is in case the information for the reference gets moved, it makes it easier to find a new link.

For your first article, I think it's generally pretty good- a lot of first articles tend to either be purely promotional, very short, or have absolutely no references. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:46, 27 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]