Talk:Star of Love/GA1
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Reviewer: Petergriffin9901 (talk • message • contribs • count • logs • email)
- Fail - This article is being quick-failed. There are far too many issues to out-line, and it appears you nominated this in haste. Several issues, I'll list the basics
- The prose are very poor; "Star of Love was well generally well received by critics, with the Deluxe Edition receiving higher praise still" - "The singles also received a lot of attention from fellow musicians / music producers and a large number of remixes have been released" - ?
- MoS violations everywhere
- Over-usage of quotes. There doesn't seem to be any text you've written yourself. This is problematic for copy-vio issues
- Why are there two of the same covers? I'm removing one as we speak
- No offense intended, but the article is a mess; it doesn't follow any of the basic guidelines or normal outlines set for Albums
- The references are littered with unreliable sources. I can't find any high-quality stuff here. All by fansites, forum pages and God knows what
- Good luck next time. Take my advice, don't re-nominate until there has been much work done. Good luck. Feel free to ask me any questions on my talk page on your road for GA. Cheers.--CallMeNathan • Talk2Me 08:43, 3 September 2011 (UTC)