Talk:Steve Driehaus/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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The article is pretty good overall, but here's a couple things I fond that need fixing:

Can Cincinnati City Council be un-redlinked? If an article can be made, great. If not, I won't worry about it.
- Yes.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 20:38, 16 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"However, Driehaus survived his own serious challenge in the 2006 election for his state house seat" Any way to be more specific on this and his other state rep elections? Who did he face, how well did he do? (You have it in the table at least though)
- I have incorporated it in text and removed the POV serious.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 20:38, 16 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Avoid one-sentence paragraphs, I see a couple in the 2008 race section.
- Someone must have fixed this already.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:00, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Now comes the major problem with the article, the references:
- Ref #2 requires registration.
  - I swapped this out, but may put it back and say subscription requeired because I can not find everthing elsewhere. Stay tuned.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:17, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
    - Alright. Looks like the rest of the issues are fixed, so just let me know when you're done here :) Wizardman 03:25, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
      - I had to add back original because a couple of encyclopedic facts were lost. Note I added (registration required) to the citation.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 03:58, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref #7 does not work.
  - swopped out ref.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 04:18, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
- Ref #37 does not work.
  - I swapped out this ref.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 02:38, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Upon all this being fixed, I'll pass the article. Wizardman 18:12, 16 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good, I'll now pass the article. I'd like to see more added, but as a GA it's fine. Wizardman 04:30, 17 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]