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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 14:50, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:01, 19 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link conservation area.
    • Linked.
  • river Thames → River Thames. This needs fixing throughout the article.
    • Fixed all.
  • Royal Family is capitalized inconsistently and linked at second mention. Also, I think the link should lead to the British Royal Family instead of just royal family in general.
    • Linked, and l/c for all.
  • Link Brentford.
    • Linked.
  • "could be called" → "was called"
    • Done.
  • Link The Constant Nymph and Pathé.
    • Linked.
  • "Zoffany House, is Grade II* listed" → What's the asterisk for?
    • The star means a bit up from ordinary Grade II in English Heritage's scheme of life, in other words a specially fine building.
  • Having two short paras start with "Next are" is repetitive.
    • Fixed.
  • "The actress Eileen Atkins and the novelist Margaret Kennedy, who set her bestselling 1924 work The Constant Nymph there." → Doesn't make grammatical sense.
    • Fixed.
  • What makes Hidden London a reliable source?
    • It's systematic, long-standing, and cites its sources properly.