Talk:Strike Back: Project Dawn/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 01:31, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• I'll review this.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:31, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
  • I am not sure I understand the relationship between Strike Back: Project Dawn, Strike Back (TV series) and other related subjects. Why isn't there some sort of navbox?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:53, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• • There are only two Strike Back related pages, this one, and the the previous series. I don't think that two pages is worth a navbox. -- Matthew RD 17:48, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• • When the article for the next series is created a navbox might be considered along with a list of episodes and a list of characters as well as a franchis page.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:13, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• • I added some links.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

WP:LEAD

• Is this available on DVD?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:53, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• Done. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Series overview

• I have never seen this series. I am unable to tell if they find Latif or Porter, if their unit endures casualties, if they find WMDs, if the series ends in a cliffhanger, etc. The overview in general leaves me wondering a lot and probably does not summarize the important details of the series.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:53, 1 January 2012 (UTC)
  • Some more of the details from the episodes below belongs here, I believe.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Cast and characters

• Is there a list of Strike Back characters article? If so, use {{main}} tag.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:24, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

  No there is not. -- Matthew RD 17:48, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• File:PhilipWinchesterApr10.jpg needs a {{personality rights}} tag.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• Done. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

What? "However, the only cast member to return from the original series was Richard Armitage in the first episode. " If my english is good, this sentence is not correct. Richard Armitage is not the only member to return, since the two main characters are still the same. Luckyboy1965 (talk) 01:42, 25 October 2012 (UTC)

Critical reactions

• Critics like Hank Stuever should be linked. Link all critics that have WP bios.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• Done. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• Also link all 1st references to other shows like Die Hard.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:33, 1 January 2012 (UTC)

• I'm not sure what you mean on this one. Could you elaborate? -- Matthew RD 17:48, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• If you mention another TV show or movie, the first time you do it should be wikilinked.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 18:15, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

• Done. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Episodes

1. "find the second" - what was the first; demanding->demand
2. turns out to a woman->turns out to be a woman; was to be planted->were to be planted; is being escorted->is escorted
3. first sentence quite run-on
4. O.K.
5. O.K.
6. their vehicle breaks down and are forced->their vehicle breaks down, and they are forced
7. his cousin, Rana from->his cousin, Rana, from
8. O.K.
9. O.K.
10. Section base and they->Section base, and they--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Done fixes on the episodes section. -- Matthew RD 19:19, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

I am placing this article on hold. The concerns should be relatively easy to address within the next 7 days when I will reassess the article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:29, 2 January 2012 (UTC)

Well done. I am Passing this article right now.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 20:26, 2 January 2012 (UTC)